4th

THE ORIGINAL


I SAID I FORGIVE YOU,
DOES I SINCERE? NOT AT ALL.
ACTUALLY I NEVER FORGIVE YOU.
EVEN IT'S OLD STORY.
IT'S HURT ME SO MUCH.
THE WAY YOU IGNORE ME.
GAMING MY FEELING.
HOW WAS THAT?
DOES IT'S EASY TO ME?
DOES THAT EASY TO FORGIVE YOU?
NOT AT ALL.
MY HEART HURT SO MUCHH !
IT WILL NEVER BEEN HEALED.
I WILL NEVER FORGET WHAT YOU DID TO ME.
FOR THE LAST TIME.
I NEVER FORGIVE YOU UNTIL MY LAST BREATH : /


THE MISTAKES


I SAID I FORGIVE YOU,
DOES I SINCERE? NOT AT ALL.
ACTUALLY I NEVER FORGIVE YOU.
EVEN IT'S OLD STORY.
IT'S HURT ME SO MUCH.
THE WAY YOU IGNORE ME.
GAMING MY FEELING.
HOW WAS THAT?
DOES IT'S EASY TO ME?
DOES THAT EASY TO FORGIVE YOU?
NOT AT ALL.
MY HEART HURT SO MUCHH !
IT WILL NEVER BEEN HEALED.
I WILL NEVER FORGET WHAT YOU DID TO ME.
FOR THE LAST TIME.
I NEVER FORGIVE YOU UNTIL MY LAST BREATH : /




THE CORRECTIONS


I SAID I HAD FORGIVEN YOU,
WAS I SINCERE? NOT AT ALL.
ACTUALLY, I HAD NEVER FORGIVEN YOU.
EVEN IF IT'S OLD STORY.
IT HURTS ME SO MUCH.
THE WAY YOU IGNORED ME.
PLAYING WITH MY FEELINGS.
HOW WAS THAT?
WAS IT EASY FOR ME?
WAS IT EASY FOR ME TO FORGIVE YOU?
NOT AT ALL.
MY HEART HURTS SO MUCHH !
IT WILL NEVER HEAL.
I WILL NEVER FORGET WHAT YOU DID TO ME.
FOR THE LAST TIME.
I NEVER FORGIVE YOU UNTIL MY LAST BREATH : /

3rd

THE ORIGINAL

sweet talker ! oh no ! i'm gonna crazy now ! i really wanna to cry now ! plizz ! give me time ! don't make me cry coz of you anymore ! hope you can happy on your life . whoaa ! no ! i don't want to cry ! plizz stop me ! plizz ! make me calm down ! i hate to cry like this . it will make me more hurtsss ! let me die ? haha . it can right ? hmm . really hope it . but i noe ! that was can't ! hmm . okay that's all .

THE MISTAKES

sweet talker ! oh no ! i'm gonna crazy now ! i really wanna to cry now ! plizz ! give me time ! don't make me cry coz of you anymore ! hope you can happy on your life . whoaa ! no ! i don't want to cry ! plizz stop me ! plizz ! make me calm down ! i hate to cry like this . it will make me more hurtsss ! let me die ? haha . it can right ? hmm . really hope it . but i noe ! that was can't ! hmm . okay that's all .


THE CORRECTIONS


sweet talker ! oh no ! i'm starting to go crazy ! i really want to cry now ! please ! give me time ! don't make me cry because of you anymore ! hope you can be happy with your life . whoaa ! no ! i don't want to cry ! please stop it ! please ! i need to calm down ! i hate crying like this . it will hurt me more ! let me die ? haha . is it possible ? hmm . i really hope it is . but i know ! it is just not possible ! hmm . okay that's all .

2nd

THE ORIGINAL

you,i love you so much . please don't think like that . i will never never and never trust your friends anymore . i just want to let you know,i love you whole my heart . i don't want anybody stole you from me because i love you . i will never make you angry again . i am sure we will be couple . skandal ? just okay for me . i know,you are not love me with all your heart,just half . but,i will cry when we are fighting . i don't want its happen again . i know you're not love me the whole of your heart because,i'm so childish for you . i want that you know,i love you whole of my heart,don't thinks that i hate you .

THE MISTAKES

you,i love you so much . please don't think like that . i will never never and never trust your friends anymore . i just want to let you know,i love you whole my heart . i don't want anybody stole you from me because i love you . i will never make you angry again . i am sure we will be couple . skandal ? just okay for me . i know,you are not love me with all your heart,just half . but i will cry when we are fighting . i don't want its happen again . i know you're not love me the whole of your heart because,i'm so childish for you . i want that you know,i love you whole of my heart,don't thinks that i hate you .

THE CORRECTIONS

you,i love you so much . please don't think like that . i will never never and never trust your friends anymore . i just want to let you know,i love you with all my heart . i don't want anybody to steal you away from me because i love you . i will never make you angry again . i am sure we will be a couple . scandal ? i'm okay with that . i know you don't love me with all your heart. I cry my eyes out every time we fight . i don't want this to happen again .I know you don't love me with all your heart because i'm such a childish person .I just want you to know that i love you so much and don't ever think that i hate you.

1st

So, i got this first example. All i can say is, please go and find yourself an english teacher. I'm BEGGING you dear because your grammar skills are awful. Stop making a fool out of yourself :/

THE ORIGINAL i need a person who that playing sport same like me . can love me truthly . and i can believe the person  oke ? THE MISTAKES i need a person who that playing sport same like me . can love me truthly . and i can believe the person  oke ? THE CORRECTIONS i need a person who plays the same type of sports like i do. can truly love me. and i can believe that person okay ? So, that's all i can share today. See you again for more ;)

How it all starts

Hello.Let me just give you a short briefing about this blog. People these days, they love to speak English. I mean, it's not a sin, we should help them but IF they weren't so bloody arrogant we WOULD have helped them. But no, they tried to show the world how beautiful their WAY OF WRITING in English can be. It's really embarrassing  actually. I'm not talking about everyone but i'm more of referring this to a certain amount of people that i know who truly thinks that their English is so great that they won't take other people's advices. Go ahead and write all sorts of crap all you want. I'm not the one that will looked down at, you are. Furthermore, what we will be posting from now on and then are posts written by people who utterly needs help in their English language. Goodbye