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So, i got this first example. All i can say is, please go and find yourself an english teacher. I'm BEGGING you dear because your grammar skills are awful. Stop making a fool out of yourself :/

THE ORIGINAL i need a person who that playing sport same like me . can love me truthly . and i can believe the person  oke ? THE MISTAKES i need a person who that playing sport same like me . can love me truthly . and i can believe the person  oke ? THE CORRECTIONS i need a person who plays the same type of sports like i do. can truly love me. and i can believe that person okay ? So, that's all i can share today. See you again for more ;)